Boat carried the lovers
To the shore
They whispered among the flowers
And bushes
They took the small path
And vanished
Never to return
Boat waited and waited
Ripples from big house boats
Passing by,hit the small boat
Saying Come with us,
they would not return,
But the boat is waiting
Because, a day like this
One may return
If not both !
-Ajith 17/06/24
5 comments:
Reminded me of Ophelia's body floating.
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Well done. Very clever. I removed last two sentences because Ines said i have a darker mind. I wrote - boat is there because one is returning , with ashes.
We have done a walk near our house, by the river Lea. This boat is always there. So I wrote a poem.
Very useful posts
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